Very nice! I like the overall feel, and the bridge is really nice. Well done.
I really liked this! It wasn't EXTREMELY repetitive, but it still had its chorus lick. great job! :D
I liked them both. I was more interested in 'Mercury' than 'Gummyworms'. 'Mercury' had a nice vibe to it, a lot going on while still sticking to the basics. 'Gummyworms' had a good groove going, but it felt a bit minimalistic. Keep working on them!
thanks.. I will keep working hard!
Awesome! Really liked what you've got here. Only thing I could suggest is maybe put some more melody on top of that 'BING' accent. Nice!
I like the groove you can get to this song, but it didn't really go anywhere. Great ideas with the beats and melody, but get some dynamics going. Great otherwise! :D
I like the ambient feel of this so far. Where are you planning to go with this song? Are you going to build it up and get louder and groovier or just leave the ambience all the way through?
As for now, I'd say mess with the levels a bit. Everything seems to be at the same volume. try making the white noise quieter than the melody.
Yea I am actually going to do all of that, I'll definitely be adding a transition to a more upbeat beat while and. If anything I might make it die down a little bit to enhance the ambient feel of it. This is my first song ever on ableton, so if you are familiar with the program and have any suggestions on what instruments I should add or replace another one, I'm open for anything
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